SONG: Don't Bring Me Down
in [Cakewalk]
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From: Neil Rutman on 1 Mar 2010 14:18 First mix. Any and all comments welcome. www.soundclick.com/neilrutman Thanks, Neil R
From: Neil Rutman on 1 Mar 2010 14:56 Thanks Glennbo! Neil R "Glennbo" <vdrumsYourHeadFromYourAss(a)cox.net> wrote in message news:Xns9D2E8DAEE2443BrownShoesDontMakeIt(a)188.40.43.245... > The killer robot "Neil Rutman" <neilrut(a)speakeasy.net> grabbed the > controls > of the spaceship cakewalk.audio and pressed these buttons... > >> First mix. Any and all comments welcome. >> >> www.soundclick.com/neilrutman > > Cool song Neil. Nice harmonies. > > -- > Remove YourHeadFromYourAss to Reply by email > ________ __ > / ____/ /__ ____ ____ / /_ ____ > / / __/ / _ \/ __ \/ __ \/ __ \/ __ \ > / /_/ / / __/ / / / / / / /_/ / /_/ / > \____/_/\___/_/ /_/_/ /_/_.___/\____/ > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > Glennbo http://www.soundclick.com/glennbo > Non-Linear Sound http://www.soundclick.com/jambits > Hear My Music http://www.soundclick.com/ThePseudonyms
From: Steve L. on 1 Mar 2010 15:34 "Neil Rutman" <neilrut(a)speakeasy.net> wrote in news:vbydnbThp_O8jhHWnZ2dnUVZ_hOdnZ2d(a)speakeasy.net: > First mix. Any and all comments welcome. > > www.soundclick.com/neilrutman > > Thanks, > > Neil R > > First off .. I'm a fan... Great song writing in all your tunes and this one fits in with those. I'm on crappy speakers here too so .... One thing is I'm not in love with the sound of the intro .. It sounds little thin but maybe that's my speakers. Great Job !
From: Neil Rutman on 1 Mar 2010 15:55 Thanks Bob! Steve L., Thanks and your right it is "thin" and will be fixed. Neil R "Steve L." <emailme(a)myemail.addy> wrote in message news:Xns9D2E9E82169BBemailmemyemailaddy(a)69.16.185.250... > "Neil Rutman" <neilrut(a)speakeasy.net> wrote in > news:vbydnbThp_O8jhHWnZ2dnUVZ_hOdnZ2d(a)speakeasy.net: > >> First mix. Any and all comments welcome. >> >> www.soundclick.com/neilrutman >> >> Thanks, >> >> Neil R >> >> > > First off .. I'm a fan... > Great song writing in all your tunes and this one fits in with those. > I'm on crappy speakers here too so .... One thing is I'm not in love > with the sound of the intro .. It sounds little thin but maybe that's my > speakers. > Great Job !
From: Here In Oregon on 1 Mar 2010 15:56
"Neil Rutman" > First mix. Any and all comments welcome. "Don't Bring Me Down" Well I hope to not bring you down. <g> Quick few thoughts; I am going to be very particular. 1. Opening acoustic guitar might have just a tene tiny too much high end sheen. 2. Lead guitar solo at 48-49 second is slightly botched. 3. Excellent use of *harmonies* and vocals. (Bruce Hornsbyish but better) ;-) 4. Lead guitar solo starting at around at 2:30-2:40 is not quite as tight as I would like and there seems to be some very slight tuning issues. 5. Nice lyrics and vocal phrasing. 6. Good use of dynamics throughout. 7. Catchy tune. Another winner here Neil. Nice job! Five stars ***** out of Five stars ***** HIO |